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Post by Octavius Thorson on Jul 28, 2012 23:21:32 GMT 1
Approved Vincent
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Post by Octavius Thorson on Jul 29, 2012 0:30:07 GMT 1
Character Name: Area Affected: Hero Attire/Special Equipment Current ability: Hero Attire: The Update:Hero Attire: Just remove that section please, leave original hero attire. Special Equipment Mjolnir Octavius has inherited his father's hammer, Mjolnir. With Mjolnir Octavius can control the weather as his father is known to do, the hammer also allows Octavius to fly, teleport, project energy (such as the God blast), create force fields, disrupt magic and perform all other feats the hammer is capable of achieving.[/i] Back-up: Nothing being "developed" but this thread is likely relevant. IC Explanation: You'll see in the thread! Sample: Octavius held up his hammer, sacred Mjolnir once wielded by Odin and passed to his son Thor whom passed it to his son Octacius. He held it pointing towards the sky with all the authority of a God on Earth. For that's what he was. Octavius Thorson, Prince of Asgard and First Son of Themyscira. The clear blue skies turned a dark grey as rain clouds gathered from all directions, forming from nowhere and everywhere. With one swing of his arm Octavius wielding the power of Thor brought down rain. "Thank you, Sir." replied Edwin Jarvis as Octavius summoned the rains down to water his gardens. "You are welcome friend." replied Octavius with a smile. With his task done to aid Jarvis Octavius placed away his hammer and turned on the spot and making his way into the Avengers Mansion. It was good to be the God.
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Post by Vincent Stark on Jul 29, 2012 0:37:28 GMT 1
Approved Octy
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Post by Charlie Drake on Aug 20, 2012 16:29:58 GMT 1
Character Name: Charlie Drake
Area Affected: Abilities
Current ability: Martial Arts: Charlie has mastered several martial arts but his most preferred type of combat is Stick Fighting and Jujitsu, as well as boxing and occasionally brawling techniques and moves, and Escrima techniques. He has incorporated aspects of Bruce Wayne, Dick Grayson and his father's fighting styles into his own, as well as others. His skills in Martial Arts are so great that he held his own against Ra's Al Ghul and took down Flag Smasher in combat. However, his father or any other veteran, more experienced member of the Bat-Family could take him down, as they are more skilled in martial arts than he is. However, Charlie has mixed all of these martial arts skills into his own form of combat, using these martial arts into a skillfully blended mix that plays to his strengths.
The Update: Martial Arts: Charlie has mastered several martial arts but his most preferred type of combat is Stick Fighting and Jujitsu, as well as boxing and occasionally brawling techniques and moves, and Escrima techniques. During his time in a wheelchair, Charlie became more skilled in Escrima and achieved some skill in Dragon Style Kung Fu. He has incorporated aspects of Bruce Wayne, Dick Grayson and his father's fighting styles into his own, as well as others. His skills in Martial Arts are so great that he held his own against Ra's Al Ghul and took down Flag Smasher in combat. However, his father or any other veteran, more experienced member of the Bat-Family could take him down, as they are more skilled in martial arts than he is. However, Charlie has mixed all of these martial arts skills into his own form of combat, using these martial arts into a skillfully blended mix that plays to his strengths.
Back-up:
IC Explanation: During his time in a wheelchair, Charlie practiced his Martial Arts extensively, becoming more skilled in Escrima and Dragon Style Kung-Fu.
Sample: Stretching slightly, Charles grinned. He was out of the wheelchair, and he could walk once again. now was to see if his Martial Arts training, which he had kept up extensively during his paralysis, had worked. He'd brought his Escrima sticks with him, and he'd be doing some Dragon Style Kung Fu as well. "If I meet Gambit again, I am sure I'll be able to take him on without getting hurt....As bad as last time."
Walking over to a training dummy, a silent moment passed. And then, Charlie struck at the dummy with his right stick. And then, struck at it with his left stick. Releasing a flurry of strikes with the Escrima sticks, he was glad to see his Escrima training had worked perfectly. Dropping the sticks, he took on a specific pose, one foot in front of his other foot, and his hands raised in front of him. Attacking the dummy, he unleashed a specific attack. With his palm outstretched, and his fingers curled in like claws, he unleashed all of his strength into the attack. The dummy was thrown back, and he grinned. "No rust on me."
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Post by Black Death on Aug 22, 2012 3:48:42 GMT 1
Character Name: Terry Elise
Area Affected: Location, base of operation.
Current ability: There is no base of operation in his app.
The Update:
Because of the incident at the hospital Terry did not wanting to mix his personal life and his secret life together, so it was time to get rid of the evidence. Terry found a secluded place where he could work out of and store all this equipment and things. He didn’t want anything Black Death related in his home or connected with his personal being. There was already enough suspicion growing around him.
Terry’s base of operations is within an old city grave yard outside of the big city seven miles from his home. It is over grown and falling apart, unused, with graves dated back over two hundred years and is now a historic relic. The grave yard was closed off with a seven foot ivy covered fence to keep people out. Because no one uses it or visits it has been closed to the public.
It’s between a school and a stretch of homes. There have been reports of the place being haunted ever since it was build and it is true that things other than black mists roam these rolling tombstones hills. Inside there is a building with where services were held and a basement where the keepers worked. Inside the building Black Death holds all his dastardly evil goods; toxins, animals, his equipment and everything Black Death related.
Back-up:
IC Explanation: He will be visiting this place in the future and it will be used for future battle grounds.
Sample:
Enter the Crypt of the Black Death:
“Dude suck in your gut.” A kid laughed as his friend became stuck trying to slide under the gate. The other four teenagers were already inside the yard and they helped the other fat one in. Carrying on once they reached the yard, they had with them several packs of beer and alcohol and junk food. They began damaging things and sprayed tomb stones with paint and littered with trash, cigarettes and cans. Becoming drunken and loud, it wasn’t long before someone become aware of them.
Making out behind a large head stone, two of them were about to desecrate the plots below. Placing his hand down her skirt, the young man began to start their interactions. Turning their attention the young couple sexing it up found that moans were coming from a dark patch about thirty feet from them and they weren’t from them. It was a dark and cryptic moaning that sounded like someone was dying or in deep agony. The ghoulish moans because to grow around them and something began to sweep back and forth around the stones and their entangled bodies. A dark ghost rose up from the tall grass and a cryptic voice then spoke softly to them.
“Geeet ooout! Leeave uuus. OOOOOOO! Leeeave thiiis plaaacee.” It said to them. Screaming, the half naked youth ran towards the rest of the group. Around them more of these ghostly figures formed from the tombstones and a waved about. Small cuts began to appear on the one males and a wisp picked up and tugged the hair of one of the girls. The group quite swiftly left the grounds in fear and didn’t think to grab any of their things. Terry helped himself to the a pack of cigarettes left by them.
Terry formed up from the darkness in the middle of the yard, holding a cigarette in hand as he watching the last one slip under the gate. This was his place of solitude, his dark crypt and he would protect his secret. He didn’t kill them, no, but if he kept up enough evidence of the haunted grave yard it would keep people out. Well, except for annoying ghost hunters, if he had any more of those enter his domain he would make sure they were given the full experience and they would not leave.
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Post by Charlie Drake on Sept 5, 2012 20:13:43 GMT 1
Bump for Charlie Drake's update
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Post by Vincent Stark on Sept 8, 2012 3:03:19 GMT 1
Character Name: Charlie Drake Area Affected: Special Equipment/abilities Current ability: Robin Hood suit: Charlie's Robin Hood suit is lined with a version of the Nomex fire-resistant, triple-weave Kevlar-lined material. It is an excellent protection against damage, and it's also electrically insulated. This suit was made for his fighting style, going towards an archer style that also allows for hand to hand combat when needed. The domino mask is attached to his face with spirit gum, keeping it in place no matter what. Martial Arts: Charlie has mastered several martial arts but his most preferred type of combat is Stick Fighting and Jujitsu, as well as boxing and occasionally brawling techniques and moves, and Escrima techniques. He has incorporated aspects of Bruce Wayne, Dick Grayson and his father's fighting styles into his own, as well as others. His skills in Martial Arts are so great that he held his own against Ra's Al Ghul and took down Flag Smasher in combat. However, his father or any other veteran, more experienced member of the Bat-Family could take him down, as they are more skilled in martial arts than he is. However, Charlie has mixed all of these martial arts skills into his own form of combat, using these martial arts into a skillfully blended mix that plays to his strengths. The Update: Robin Hood suit: Charlie's Robin Hood suit is lined with a version of the Nomex fire-resistant, triple-weave Kevlar-lined material. It is an excellent protection against damage, and it's also electrically insulated. This suit was made for his fighting style, going towards an archer style that also allows for hand to hand combat when needed. The domino mask is attached to his face with spirit gum, keeping it in place no matter what. To help him in a fight against a superhuman, Charlie has added neuromuscular amplifiers, that enhance his strength levels to low superhuman levels. Since he can lift 500 lbs at most, his strength is multiplied by 10. This allows him to lift 2 and a half tons when he wears the suit. As well as this, he can activate the neuromuscular amplifiers when it is needed. As well as this, he has added aditional metallic plates to his gloves, that protect his hands when he uss the amplifiers. These plates incorporate impact dampening plates that dampen the force he would take from hitting a superhuman. Martial Arts: Charlie has mastered several martial arts but his most preferred type of combat is Stick Fighting and Jujitsu, as well as boxing and occasionally brawling techniques and moves, and Escrima techniques. During his time in a wheelchair, Charlie became more skilled in Escrima and achieved some skill in Dragon Style Kung Fu. He has incorporated aspects of Bruce Wayne, Dick Grayson and his father's fighting styles into his own, as well as others. His skills in Martial Arts are so great that he held his own against Ra's Al Ghul and took down Flag Smasher in combat. However, his father or any other veteran, more experienced member of the Bat-Family could take him down, as they are more skilled in martial arts than he is. However, Charlie has mixed all of these martial arts skills into his own form of combat, using these martial arts into a skillfully blended mix that plays to his strengths. Back-up: IC Explanation: To be able to combat superhumans without being overpowered, Charlie added this amplifier to his suit during the time he was paralysed, and become more skilled in martial arts. Sample: Wheeling over to a training dummy, Charlie stretched slightly. He was about to test his neuromuscular amplifiers, so he was wearing the upper portion of his costume. Even though he was paralysed, he wanted to add the extra amplifiers to his suit so that he could combat superhumans easier. Pulling up the holographic computer of his costume, Charlie activated the neuromuscular amplifiers. Looking at the training dummy, which weighed at least one ton, he got ready to put the new amplifiers to proper use. To be able to damage it, he'd need some superhuman strength. Punching the dummy twice in the gut, he grinned as it was pushed back slightly. Despite his paralysis, his combat skills had not atrophied. They had thrived, as he was able to focus on his training. Punching the dummy three more times, he focused all of his newly enhanced strength into his arms, and that meant he could lift 2.5 tons at most, and caused that much damage. Punching the dummy with all of his strength, it was thrown back and hit the wall. Grinning, he said “Paralysed, yes. But I can still invent and modify my gear, and become even more skilled in Martial Arts.” As you do not have an extensive posting history here, we want to tone down the upgrade just a bit. After talking it over with staff we think that you can either have strength multiplied by 5 or the martial arts training. I would suggest the martial arts training as you have referenced it multiple times in posts, ad in cbox.
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Post by Vincent Stark on Sept 8, 2012 3:04:28 GMT 1
Character Name: Terry Elise Area Affected: Location, base of operation. Current ability: There is no base of operation in his app. The Update: Terry’s base of operations is within an old city grave yard outside of the big city seven miles from his home. It is over grown and falling apart, unused, with graves dated back over two hundred years and is now a historic relic. The grave yard was closed off with a seven foot ivy covered fence to keep people out. Because no one uses it or visits it has been closed to the public. It’s between a school and a stretch of homes. There have been reports of the place being haunted ever since it was build and it is true that things other than black mists roam these rolling tombstones hills. Inside there is a building with where services were held and a basement where the keepers worked. Inside the building Black Death holds all his dastardly evil goods; toxins, animals, his equipment and everything Black Death related. Back-up: IC Explanation: He will be visiting this place in the future and it will be used for future battle grounds. Sample: Enter the Crypt of the Black Death: “Dude suck in your gut.” A kid laughed as his friend became stuck trying to slide under the gate. The other four teenagers were already inside the yard and they helped the other fat one in. Carrying on once they reached the yard, they had with them several packs of beer and alcohol and junk food. They began damaging things and sprayed tomb stones with paint and littered with trash, cigarettes and cans. Becoming drunken and loud, it wasn’t long before someone become aware of them. Making out behind a large head stone, two of them were about to desecrate the plots below. Placing his hand down her skirt, the young man began to start their interactions. Turning their attention the young couple sexing it up found that moans were coming from a dark patch about thirty feet from them and they weren’t from them. It was a dark and cryptic moaning that sounded like someone was dying or in deep agony. The ghoulish moans because to grow around them and something began to sweep back and forth around the stones and their entangled bodies. A dark ghost rose up from the tall grass and a cryptic voice then spoke softly to them. “Geeet ooout! Leeave uuus. OOOOOOO! Leeeave thiiis plaaacee.” It said to them. Screaming, the half naked youth ran towards the rest of the group. Around them more of these ghostly figures formed from the tombstones and a waved about. Small cuts began to appear on the one males and a wisp picked up and tugged the hair of one of the girls. The group quite swiftly left the grounds in fear and didn’t think to grab any of their things. Terry helped himself to the a pack of cigarettes left by them. Terry formed up from the darkness in the middle of the yard, holding a cigarette in hand as he watching the last one slip under the gate. This was his place of solitude, his dark crypt and he would protect his secret. He didn’t kill them, no, but if he kept up enough evidence of the haunted grave yard it would keep people out. Well, except for annoying ghost hunters, if he had any more of those enter his domain he would make sure they were given the full experience and they would not leave. I think this one is almost ready to go. If you could just give a little more info as to why/how he got these new upgrades that would be awesome. Thanks.
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Post by Charlie Drake on Sept 8, 2012 12:03:47 GMT 1
Okay, Charlie's update is done now.
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Post by Black Death on Sept 8, 2012 17:54:55 GMT 1
Added in: Because of the incident at the hospital Terry did not wanting to mix his personal life and his secret life together, so it was time to get rid of the evidence. Terry found a secluded place where he could work out of and store all this equipment and things. He didn’t want anything Black Death related in his home or connected with his personal being. There was already enough suspicion growing around him.
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Post by Charlie Drake on Oct 16, 2012 21:49:06 GMT 1
Bump for Charlie
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Post by Vincent Stark on Oct 24, 2012 3:00:25 GMT 1
approved Charlie.
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Post by Claude LeBeau on Jan 31, 2013 4:13:32 GMT 1
WIP
Character Name: Claude LeBeau
Area Affected: Businessman (Skills)
Current ability: As a high ranking member of the Hellfire Club, Claude has seen it fit to adapt to his new surroundings and as such, has used his finances to develop a high-end security company. This company primarily deals in bodyguards & dog units, state-of-the-art security hardware, software and vehicles. The company enjoys contracts with several members of the Hellfire Club and associates, while also serving to legitimize Claude's funds earned elsewhere. Gambit The Terminator is currently the most expensive and dangerous Assassin on the planet, bar none.
The Update:
Back-up:
IC Explanation: Continued use of Hellfire contacts, assets and allies aids Claude in developing his company.
Sample: A sample RP (two 5 line paragraphs minimum) showing your update in effect IC
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