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Post by Black Death on Jun 12, 2011 4:26:04 GMT 1
My bad Fix that bit.
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Post by Madeline Wayne on Jun 19, 2011 23:19:54 GMT 1
"He can store multible things in this force, as well as people, who would be unable to see or move."
^ Where does he store these things? The force is just the energy that is used. Does he store it in the darkforce dimension? Apparently, "most beings cannot safely traverse the Darkforce", so storing people in the Darkforce dimension would sort of be a death sentence, especially without Terry alongside them.
The pounds per pressure should be pounds per square inch, but that only describes pressure/ crushing force. Can you add something that also deals with the Newton force of the push or pull that he can generate?
As for the shadow fusing and traveling, calling something a portal and then saying that he can fuse to something and travel under things doesn't quite connect.
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Post by Black Death on Jun 23, 2011 0:29:07 GMT 1
Where does he store these things? He just holds them in the darkness, they don’t go anywhere dimension wise.
The pounds per pressure should be pounds per square inch, but that only describes pressure/ crushing force. Can you add something that also deals with the Newton force of the push or pull that he can generate? I have no idea what to do here. I tried to explain it the best I could. If you want some other type of measurement someone will have to help me with this.
As for the shadow fusing and traveling, calling something a portal and then saying that he can fuse to something and travel under things doesn't quite connect. The portal bit was removed, sorry for the confusion.
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Post by Octavius Thorson on Jul 19, 2011 18:03:09 GMT 1
Half-approved
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Post by Madeline Wayne on Jul 19, 2011 20:20:19 GMT 1
Approved~
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